Plot
Carol Walls, a make-up artist, was on the search for a star to take the lead in a new musical show “Sandie”.
Notes
Appeared
- The Search for Sandie – Tracy: #270 (1 December 1984) – #276 (12 January 1985)
Carol Walls, a make-up artist, was on the search for a star to take the lead in a new musical show “Sandie”.
Needs a full stop at the end, extra space to be deleted before “Sandie”, and “make up” should be”makeup”.
Your first two points are of course accurate, Muffin, but not the third. The noun ‘makeup’ should be ‘make-up’, not ‘makeup’.